Dandelion Offerings

Dandelion Offerings

A Poem by Anastasia_Snow

I once met a girl of age three or four.
At first meeting, she offered me
Something I will not forget:
A small yellow dandelion.

She held it out to me, smiling proudly;
I accepted it with a "thanks."
Polite, not very sincere.
I tucked the weed behind my ear.

The next time we met, she gave me a leaf;
She held it like some precious thing.
"I picked this leaf just for you."
Another insincere "thank you".

I saw her again the very next day.
This time, her father was with her.
She made me a daisy chain;
She offered it like it was gold.

Then I realized that these simple flowers
Were something precious to the girl.
Though her offering was small,
In the girl's sight, it was special.

This time, I accepted the little gift
With real and sincere gratitude.
She had offered all she could,
And I saw now, she had each time.

Before I left, her father thanked me for
Politely accepting the chain.
"It was a pleasure," I said.
To my surprise, it really was.

© 2016 Anastasia_Snow


Author's Note

Anastasia_Snow
This was inspired by the little "gifts" my younger sisters (ages 4 and 6) often give me. Please let me know what you think.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Children are in a unique position to observe things through the eyes of wonderment. To share those things is to share in something beautiful and special. You brought that out in this poem nd put a smile on my face in the process.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anastasia_Snow

8 Years Ago

Yes, it is kind of amazing how they see things. I often wish that I could be a child again, just to .. read more
This honestly reminds me of one of my own pieces "Daisy Double", it really is the simple acts that are the most profound when we stop for a mere second to contemplate what is happening around us, well done, good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anastasia_Snow

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Thomas! It's definitely a cool idea, and I'm glad you liked the poem!
It is the little things that should mean the most and the gift of seeing the world again through a child's eyes is the best gift of all. Well done. Good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anastasia_Snow

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Ted!

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

324 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on August 12, 2016
Last Updated on August 12, 2016

Author

Anastasia_Snow
Anastasia_Snow

WA



About
You can call me Anastasia. It isn't my real name, but it is what I go by online. I enjoy reading and writing, playing instruments (clarinet and piano), studying different religions, and learning langu.. more..

Writing
Rain Rain

A Poem by Anastasia_Snow



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


sparks sparks

A Poem by Lydia Shutter