I Am The Wind

The grasses and trees bow down when I pass -

I am the wind.

I rustle long hair and the autumn leaves -

I am the wind.

I am welcomed on a warm summer day,

But despised on a cold winter evening -

I am the wind.

I am always unseen but ever felt -

For I am the wind.

Reviews

[Jim Slaughter]

I love poems about nature, and being brought up in the desert country of West Texas, I know something about the wind. This must be a spring breeze, it's pretty cool.

[Anastasia_Snow]

Thank you for reading and the review, Jim!

[maria ( rose)]

Beautifully written describing it in a charming way. very well done!
maria

[Anastasia_Snow]

Thank you very much, Maria!

[maria ( rose)]

my pleasure:)

[Sapientiam]

I have to agree with the first reviewer. This is really well written and beautifully crafted to the point where the words seem to glide off... Like the wind. There's a swaying, serene motion of the lines when I continue to read them. Nice job!

[Anastasia_Snow]

Thank you, Sapientiam! I am pretty new to poetry, and I've only written a few poems that I actually liked. Your review was really encouraging! Thank you again!

[Sapientiam]

You're welcome!

[SareeB]

This was beautiful. Reading it I felt a steady and reassuring rhythm. Well done!

[Anastasia_Snow]

Thank you so much, SareeB! I am fairly new to writing poetry, and your review is really encouraging! Thanks again!