Thinking of you

It's dark all around
But I am not afraid
For you are here
With me
Holding my hand.

I smile
Seeing rain drops
Falling on the screen of my phone
Water will ruin it
Father will be so angry
Let him ....

This tiny glow of phone
Looks so out of place here
I hope no one sees
I don't want anyone to know I am here
With you.

I know now
All that anguish
All that pain
All those complaints
They were false
Imagined

You never left me
You never can
Never will.

I am happy today
To be again in rain
With you

Reviews

[Papaya]

I remember sneaking away on family trips to phone a boy. This reminded me of that.
Missing someone and wanting to stay connected.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Something that really matters is how you react to a particular thing like how you think about something in a different manner. I always like the way you arrange your poems, the way you add some fantasy... I have marked an awesome type of stuff in your poems. I guess, your recent poems also had this type of words - " you never left me, u never can, u never will..."
type of this I mean, I like it a lot...
There is a lot to learn from you, I hope I will do it with time...
keep writing and inspiring others!!!
Ani : )

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Love has the power to heal all things and make all matters better. The surroundings that engulf you seem more lovely and posh. Everything appears beautiful. Such is the potency of love. Your poem is excellently written- putting in some lines about the phone is indeed a great idea which has been well executed. Keep writing.

[AliciaB]

This is beautiful. I love the gentle atmosphere created by the falling rain and what I imagine to be a peaceful darkness, where the "tiny glow of [a] phone / Looks out of place." Every detail of this poem adds a note of touching emotion that ultimately made me smile. I get the feeling that this is about a love interest, but to me it also seems as though it could be about God. "It's dark all around / But I am not afraid / For you are here / With me / Holding my hand"... "You never left me / You never can / Never will." Having multiple levels of meaning is a sign of a well-written poem, and this definitely is one. Excellent work!