No

I can't , I won't and I should not
Beg for the things I don't deserve
I hope to learn my lessons well
I hope to make my nouns, verbs.

I have just me and that is true
I will leave me only when dead
And the fact does not change
If I don't love me but hate instead..

The lanes, the houses, the fields and roads
All are left behind as I walk
I do not know where I have to go
No one to consult, none to talk.

But I will go on and never stop
The path will end somewhere
And in my very core I know
I will find you waiting for me there.

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Anu, it's really great how u hv managed to convey such a beautiful msg through this poem. I liked it a lot.. Waiting is something which is always great from everything else. Love is meant to be waited. In fact, the main characteristic of love is waiting, which is at times very difficult. And love will come at the right time. Even if you get it earlier, you are supposed to wait till the right time. That's what a tough task. Till that right time either you move and enjoy or keep thinking about that. Your poem provokes a strong and rigid idea about how future is the same, all that we hv to do is to make it awesome till that point where you will get the love. Till you reach to him, you should be silent, of course, enjoying and learning, without finding anyone else and storing him in place of him... very nice poem...touching my heart : )
Ani...

[Bear]

Nice philosophical and emotional depth, life is the question and living is the answer and the lessons are the experiences along the way. Nicely written Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Sami Khalil]

Love is a journey waiting to explore and embrace for each and everyone. It has its hills and valleys, smooth waters and rough seas. But the fact does not change that it expels all hate...An excellent write with a message...:)....................