Mrs so and so

I do not know how one feels
When addressed as Mrs so and so...
No one ever calls me like that
No one will.

I have tried feeling it
By writing on a paper
But my sight gets blurred
My voice gets choked

Only you have called me so
Just once
You pulled my hair
And called me Mrs so and so
And I felt so shy
That I forgot to pull your hair back

I have the pen
And paper
And trying to write
Mrs so and so

Reviews

[William Liston]

Even though I did not fully understand this piece (I'm terrible with interpretation), I liked it. It seemed like there was an underlying sense of doubt, frustration, and a little despair. I'm not sure if you were trying to be a little vague on purpose or not, but nevertheless, the ambiguity in this piece really complimented the reflective vibe. I felt like I was just going through your memories as I read this. I especially loved the line "You pulled my hair;" it seems so random, yet it seems to fit perfectly in this poem. Well done.

-William Liston

[Ananya]

Everyone has their own way to interpret things. And that's what makes each of us unique. I do not know why I wrote this poem. May be I had doubts, frustration, despair ..all of them, I was just thinking about how it is so sometimes that we write something on paper and find happiness in just that. Like writing our name along with the name of the person we love.
I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your kind review.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Sad yet beautiful.
One will always be remembered by the name of the person they have loved.

[Ananya]

Your poem Foot Steps says it all for me. Thank you for being you.. grateful for your kindness.

[Shabeeh Haider]

May God bless you always