India Diary 3

The wax that came down to the base of the cup ,
in which the vermilion candle was lit ,
created a new candle .
Just like the life itself,
the light giver re-solidified
with time.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

A brilliant revelation brought to light - and life!

[Anand Sehgal]

Pleased and honored to receive your words :)

[Ruth]

Ohh! Gorgeous, this is magnificent :) Vibrant, beautiful and stunningly written :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks much Poppy :) A few words about life :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Very wise words and they show you are truly a poet....you see life a bit differently than others. The picture you paint with your words is so lovely. Lydi*

[Anand Sehgal]

Reviews coming from you are always special Lydi :) Much love back.

[Moonie]

I like how you play with words and intertwine the two images...good writing!

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks so very much my dear friend :) Glad that you liked the write :)

[Mirror]

Yes, it created a new life. This more like a statement of reality than a poem. I almost have a peek on my candle cup again. well done

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that the piece could connect with you :)

[ms. barrie]

this is wrought with gorgeous imagery, with excellent play on words, evocative of a transformation {rebirth} ~ very inspiring write.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks so very much my dear beautiful poetess :) much love back :)

[ms. barrie]

you’re most welcomed, my friend....sincere apologies for my delayed visit upon your art - X

[Anand Sehgal]

no apologies needed at all :) stay happy barrie

[AYVID N]

The poem speaks to me of the perpetuity of life, of giving and receiving and continuity. Great images evoked!

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks so very much dear Divya :) I like it when the readers interpret a piece in their own ways :)

[AYVID N]

True that, great poetry leaves such space for interpretation! You are most welcome Anand :)