Myself Uncut (3)

The world around me has changed a lot in last ten 

years or so.

May be it is ever changing,

but  I could only see it in recent times.

A new world demands new plans that eventually

open up new avenues .

Thus the change in me started to show up,

as soon as I realized that I wanted to remain

relevant for some more time.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I have just read your "Myself Uncut" 1, 2, & 3. I would encourage you to consolidate such short related postings on this website (all on the same page). It's very time consuming to click & wait, click & wait, click & wait so many times to get your completed ideas here. Also I want to see it all together to assess the meaning collectively, but I'm not going back to click & wait many more times.

Now about the writing. I love your humility which is what makes these observations very easy to understand & ponder. Your ideas represent thought-provoking lessons, expressed with clarity & refreshing self-honesty.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks so very much Ma'am.. The thing is that they are all a bit different in core subject matter, so kept them separate. Anyways your invaluable comments have enriched me :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Not sure what the underlining was used to point out, but I found it a little irritating as I read your words. Certainly your message is clear without the underlining. Yes, everything changes and we must adjust our attitudes accordingly. We can not set a path and then stick to it without wavering....we are effected by time, space, and fate. Well written. lydi**

[Anand Sehgal]

The website has done all these. the found the keywords and underlined. Please advise me some way out ! even I am irritated enough !

[Anand Sehgal]

I have posted it again, and let me see whether it happens again or not ! . Thanks Lydi for letting me know. You care a lot about my writing. thanks so very much :)

[Lydia Shutter]

I wonder why the website did that....how frustrating for you!

[Emily]

I like your wording! Great job!

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much emily :)

[Frieda P]

Intelligent and engaging piece Anand, all that underlining takes away from your lovely words imho....

[Anand Sehgal]

true Frieda. but this website rolls that way . Crazy! isn't it ?

[Frieda P]

Is that from the ads here? ..........yes, crazy indeed.

[Savannah Bly]

I think we all wish this . Even when we see differently, we can all see the same things through time and its relevance.

[Anand Sehgal]

you elaborated the idea very aptly :) very glad to receive your kind review :)

[Savannah Bly]

Your welcome. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, love the poem, nicely written. :-)

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Change is not our enemy, we are...

I love that you realized the importance of evolving within.

Lovely write!~xoxo~:)

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so much my darling poetess :)

[Jennie Baron]

The formatting with the double underlined words is interesting and effective by drawing attention to them. As for the content, you say something profound about change that we can all relate to.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks so very much Jennie, but the formatting was done by the keyword search engine of the website. I don't know how to get rid of these ! :)

[Jennie Baron]

Oh, I see! Sometimes things this web site does have unintended consequences!

[Anand Sehgal]

:) :) :)anyway, I am so glad that you liked the write :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Changes are a necessary part of life...good poem....

[Anand Sehgal]

yes they are :) glad that you liked the write :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

simplicity at its best.. changes are indeed a way to survive

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot my dear poet friend :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome :))

[Muse]

We all want to find life's purpose and to remain relevant, without this instinct and drive what's the point of it all?

[Anand Sehgal]

we want to immortalize ourselves if possible ! very true ! :) thanks so much dear :)