Myself Uncut (1)

I don't wish the life to be fair.

I want some fair chances to win,
rather I wish to have a fair vision
capable of detecting the chances..!

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I want some fair chances to win,
rather I wish to have a fair vision
capable of detecting the chances..!

True wisdom:)

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so much dear Pryde , glad that you felt connected to the write :)

[Jennie Baron]

So much said in so few lines. I really like this one. Yes, when you think about it, detecting chances and acting upon them is so much more proactive.

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that you liked the write :) You are very kind in your reviews :)

[Anand Sehgal]

A nice and clever switch of words here...
You are on the right way, when you first wish to have a fair vision...

Well said.

- Elisa

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear :)

Anytime, will do the others, tomorrow k? :)

[Anand Sehgal]

sure :) :)

Great... I need to go now in a bit.... ;) but I will be back :D

[Muse]

Fair vision? To remain open minded is futile my friend....

[Anand Sehgal]

Why you say this Muse ? cite something firsthand.. I would very much like to know :)

[Muse]

Some of us aren't granted a fair vision because we are raised in a closet or inside a cardboard box. Therefore perception is minimal. The only ticket out is "open-mindedness"

[Vidya Bacchus]

I like this Anand.If we are all given chances and recognize them for what they are instead of noticing that we missed out on them would be great.Awesome pen my friend :)

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much my dear :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like how this poem seemed to back up...just want a chance for life to be fair...it doesn't necessarily have to be...just want a chance for it to be.

nice.

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that you liked the write :) thanks so much :)