Unearthing Life 3

After the last battle had ended ,
the most severe one;
I  entered  into a state of long  passivity,
tastelessness.
I was no more a warrior.

"The recluse" in me  provided me
with a mirror.
I used to sleep a lot, and in my dreams
I used to look at the mirror,
without any wink in my eyes.
 
With the time passing by ,
The quota of sleep as well as the  taste-gratification
had almost been satiated .
My mind got rewired,
my thoughts got rearranged.

The body -mind-soul  gradually started getting ready for the
'Final Frontier'.

The 'Revival ' was inevitable.
There is no choice.
One has to continuously fight ;
Fight very well to get things done in the desired way.

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

"The recluse" in me provided me
with a mirror.
I used to sleep a lot, and in my dreams
I used to look at the mirror,
without any wink in my eyes.

My favorite of it all speaks out from the true voice of this writing.. I liked it very well penned...

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks so very much. I am really glad that my poetry could connect so well with a so wise reader . :)

ah... you are welcome as always...

[Kasey Miriam]

well said! great poem. I enjoyed reading

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much my friend ! how are you doing?

[Kasey Miriam]

You are quite welcome. I am well. Finally just returning to the cafe. Had a rough few weeks.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

It's hard to continue to fight and win the war...excellently penned...

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much for the review :)

[TL Boehm]

Yes, the fight is never over until we breathe our last. Well penned

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so much TL :) how are you doing these days ? Haven't seen you here much in recent times .

[KWP]

Nice words - something written well and easily understood with life message we can all relate to. Yes we most always keep going x x

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much my dear poetess :) you are always kind to me :)

[MsJewel]

You have shared a wise message in this inspirational gem. The last two lines say it all.
Great writing my friend

Hugs, Julie

[Anand Sehgal]

I am honored. Much love back at you dear :) :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Fight on... that final frontier is a long way off, and there is much adventure to be had, warrior or not... A thoughtful piece, Anand.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks so very much Rita. You are my inspiration as a writer :)

[Ambra Celeste]

When depression is our companion, sleep becomes our best friend, like a bear in hibernation waiting for the winter to be over, until the brain is rewired. You used the perfect expression.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks so very much dear Ambra for the kind review :)

[Glass Heart Inc]

This is beautifully written. Describes everything so well from a state of hopelessness and solitude you can pull yourself out of the depression with your will to fight on.. :)

[Anand Sehgal]

You got the mood correct ! We have to keep moving :)