The Tune Changes
A Poem by
Anand Sehgal
Look at that one lonely valley.
When the sun rises,
along with the vermilion beams
a soft vibrant song spreads
all over it.
When the sun sets ,
the moon shows up
for the habitual evening walk.
An echoing, melancholic song
drenches the vale .
A silvery syrup is made in the black bowl
called 'The Night' ,
and as the fluent fluid hits the dark wall,
the wind column keeps churning out
the song- the Anthem of Void .
The tune changes its apparel again,
When the sun rises.
© 2014 Anand Sehgal
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Thank you for entering my competition.
Straight away you set the mood, tone and place. I walk along with your words in hand, as lovely and languid as the moon you so beautifully depict.
My favourite lines being:
'A silvery syrup is made in the black bowl
called 'The Night'
It is us who make the night, in the sense that we call it. We have given it a charm of its own, a charm which you portray so lovingly.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks so very much. I feel really honored to receive your comments :)
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Look at that one lonely valley.
When the sun rises,
along with the vermilion beams
a soft vibrant song spreads
all over it.
Wonderful and unique nature write.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Look at that one lonely valley.
When the sun rises,
along with the vermilion beams
a soft vibrant song spreads
all over it.
Wonderful and unique nature write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thanks for the kind review dear :) how are you doing?
lovely images of the sun rising and setting and marvelous changes that occur in between...just like a tune.
Posted 10 Years Ago
lovely images of the sun rising and setting and marvelous changes that occur in between...just like a tune.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks so very much Stella for the kind review :)
The tune changes its apparel again,
When the sun rises. ..
I really like the mix of images here, Anand. Visual, auditory, even tactile - a rich poem.
Posted 10 Years Ago
The tune changes its apparel again,
When the sun rises. ..
I really like the mix of images here, Anand. Visual, auditory, even tactile - a rich poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thanks a lot Rita :) you have been an inspiration for me :)
What I like about the poem is that it describes a scenario that most persons dont like to be near to and the writer makes the scene attractive.
I like the attention to detail that the writer uses to gather the readers interest into finding the descriptions from the poem valuable.
Posted 10 Years Ago
What I like about the poem is that it describes a scenario that most persons dont like to be near to and the writer makes the scene attractive.
I like the attention to detail that the writer uses to gather the readers interest into finding the descriptions from the poem valuable.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thanks so very much dear . I feel honored :)
Love back :)
Nice concept- a beautiful representation of night and day. I love the diction. Elegant.
Thanks for the share.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Nice concept- a beautiful representation of night and day. I love the diction. Elegant.
Thanks for the share.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thanks so very much friend :) :)
Simply gorgeous the way you painted the scene in my mind. Xo winter
Posted 10 Years Ago
Simply gorgeous the way you painted the scene in my mind. Xo winter
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thanks so much my dear, glad to receive your review :)
I felt this - beautiful! The imagery here is wonderfully vivid and shows a process to life, so many things we take for granted...so many things unseen until we look for them! Awesome! x
Posted 10 Years Ago
I felt this - beautiful! The imagery here is wonderfully vivid and shows a process to life, so many things we take for granted...so many things unseen until we look for them! Awesome! x
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thanks so much sweetheart :), glad that you liked it :)
I so looked through your retina, at this valley... and your words, bring vivid moments to life, my dear.
Your poetry is so rich, of truth, and well felt, moments, you're a moment catcher, a painter of life.
I so enjoyed this utterly beautiful poetic piece... chapeau... -x- :)
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
I so looked through your retina, at this valley... and your words, bring vivid moments to life, my dear.
Your poetry is so rich, of truth, and well felt, moments, you're a moment catcher, a painter of life.
I so enjoyed this utterly beautiful poetic piece... chapeau... -x- :)
- Elisa
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I am speechless. I feel very much honored dear :) much love back :)
10 Years Ago
Awww, this was a fantastic piece, I am grateful YOU have written it... my friend :) Hugs...
Nice contrast of night and day! Great write.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Nice contrast of night and day! Great write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thanks dear :)
You've captured the two sides of day and night and it is lovely.
Posted 10 Years Ago
You've captured the two sides of day and night and it is lovely.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thanks so very much my dear poet :)
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Last Updated on April 20, 2014
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Anand Sehgal Kolkata, India
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A graduate researcher, A writer, A poet, A singer, A composer,An actor..............An artist by heart
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