All on a Sudden , A night became unfathomably void..,
and I got surprised....;
The next morning , the door-bell rang uncharacteristically happy and loud, I got a healthy ,lump-some money-order to become speechless...........!!
Later, A letter made everything clear; A business group , called " You Dream, We trim",
has bought the copyright of all possible dreams and the subsequent colours,
As they wish to dish out some real-life based reel entities........,
they wrote, they have even bought the copyright of pitch dark colour, to make
the night scenes more realistic..........!!
I thought, I got rid of the bitter-sweet old inventories...,
and sincerely I didn't mind;
As I felt, I got paid more than I should have got . But the fact that the brand new dreams will be taken away before I smell them at least thrice , left me endlessly scared ....
I could not relish the "sudden flood of fortune" ..!! I glued the lucrative envelope back and kept it on my reading table...
I started thinking....about the Future.. ;
I'm still thinking...------
It seems, that "Disposal" is not always very easy ..!!
you weave an eloquent descriptive tale of flights of fancy, promises of dreams unfolding only to find out that the gold was merely faerie dust in one's hands, with incredible insightful imagery of feelings
pleasing rhyme and flow.
a very enjoyable read, profound in its foreboding of careless promises. brilliant write, Anand,
i very much enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing & pen on. *xox*
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
so kind of you dear. you got it pretty much right :) love you so much :)
11 Years Ago
you're very welcome, Anand. Glad i got something right lol -- much love back. :))
Wow. Your theme, your construction and your words are all unique! Ah, no matter how much someone buys my dream and trade it for a more powerful or extravagant price, I will not be pleased. What is a man who lives all the better days without his dreams? Tsk. I love this, Anand.
True indeed! Disposal, is actually a difficult phenomenon. More so for us, the writers. We tend to empathize with what has gone through when anything gets created.
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11 Years Ago
yes indeed. We can never forget the "creative labor". thanks Vineet :)
Hey, glad you stopped over to Kelseys.. No wonder you are a good impersonator , You do acting LOL
Did you know I was trying to get her laughing and your entrance was perfect timing. Yup.. :-)
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11 Years Ago
thanks a lot :) :) it was fun :)
11 Years Ago
Thank You ! I'll have to subscribe to you so I don't forget to come back and indulge. Looks like you.. read moreThank You ! I'll have to subscribe to you so I don't forget to come back and indulge. Looks like you have some real hot creativity happening at your place.