Moments Are Alive

Moments are colliding against
each other,
everywhere in the time space,
every now and then .

Some are dying ,
Some new are being born.
Moments are coming out of their own wombs,
Triggering a hyper-evolution.

Moments are random ,
Some are losing their way ;
Some are coming back to the right track.

Moments are entities too;
Some are being forgotten ,
Some are becoming endearing in-laws .
Moments, in a nutshell , are
very much like us.

Alert, awakened ;
 In need of proper treatments -
That is how the moments are.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This reminds me of the movie 'Crash,' starring Sandra Bullock, the only similarity being how things collide into one another; or in the case of the movie, they crash. Things seemingly unrelated, always are; and those that you hate the most end up rescuing you in the end. If moments don't collide, we're not living. The alternative would be still and silent.

The ending is a perfect summation: how we must handle with proper care.

[Anand Sehgal]

A review better than the write itself. thanks a lot dear.

[Kt k]

This also reminded me of a movie but the movie the vow and how you live your life waiting for a impact that will change it forever and its moments that are the Tonys have the most impact as whell as the greater ones

[Rita L. Sev]

I like this very much, Anand - you have captured and presented moments in a new and intriguing way. Like us - living, dying, exciting and mundane - excellent and thoughtful poem!

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much ma'am. I always try to learn from you.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Moments are everywhere and anywhere.

[Anand Sehgal]

very true Josie. We can't shun them !

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Yea! Time keeps marching on....

[icelandicblue]

I like the movements of moments in this piece. I was especially struck by this image:

Moments are coming out of their own wombs,

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you dear friend for the kind review !

[Angel]

Some moments are very special, and very beloved...others are easily forgotten.
Some are eternal in our minds...others fade into nothing but dust.
Reading this fascinating poem was a bright moment for me!

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot sweetheart. You are always kind and lavish