Moments Are Alive

Moments are colliding against
each other,
everywhere in the time space,
every now and then .

Some are dying ,
Some new are being born.
Moments are coming out of their own wombs,
Triggering a hyper-evolution.

Moments are random ,
Some are losing their way ;
Some are coming back to the right track.

Moments are entities too;
Some are being forgotten ,
Some are becoming endearing in-laws .
Moments, in a nutshell , are
very much like us.

Alert, awakened ;
 In need of proper treatments -
That is how the moments are.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This reminds me of the movie 'Crash,' starring Sandra Bullock, the only similarity being how things collide into one another; or in the case of the movie, they crash. Things seemingly unrelated, always are; and those that you hate the most end up rescuing you in the end. If moments don't collide, we're not living. The alternative would be still and silent.

The ending is a perfect summation: how we must handle with proper care.

[Anand Sehgal]

A review better than the write itself. thanks a lot dear.

[Kt k]

This also reminded me of a movie but the movie the vow and how you live your life waiting for a impact that will change it forever and its moments that are the Tonys have the most impact as whell as the greater ones

[MsJewel]

There are so many layers to this well written poem. Quite clever and thought provoking!

:) Julie

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot sweetheart, for kind comments :)

[Rachelle]

a cosmic view .... reminiscing subatomic particles and molecular bonding..... moments of creation...

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot. Glad that you spent some time on the piece :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

Being a tanka poet, I immediately translated your poem into tanka-ese. Tanka poets capture the moment in each five line poem and to me, that is the "proper treatment" for the moments you describe so well. Very well written, Anand.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot. You humble me always. I can't thank you enough :)

[Cody Williams]

A great write! The title got me hooked from the start...then again, it's me:) Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot Cody. I like your pieces as much :)

[Cody Williams]

It's no problem at all!

[Pryde Foltz]

This a write with a whole lot of layers. Loved the closing.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot Pryde, your reviews are always important to me :)

[Ruth]

So wonderfully expressed! I enjoyed this :)
Moments are indeed what shape us and become us...and have a life of their own...
Beautiful work!
x

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot sweetheart for the kind review :)

[Ruth]

My pleasure hon x

[Rafia ~ Yellow Girl]

True... cant disagree with the slightest bit of your writing!

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot Rafia :)

[Jack...]

Each and every one of us are a moment in our own time. we all ong to be cherished. very cool my friend. I like how this one felt as I read it.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot Jack, Glad that you felt that way :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

moments are very much like us...they come, they live out their time, and then they are gone...

in an instant...we are only here for what really is an instant...
we need to make the most of moments.

well said

jacob

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that this write could connect to your thoughts :)

[Sheila Kline]

Very thought provoking are your moments - you do a noteworthy analysis of these segments of time.
May we each have good moments more than we have bad moments!

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks lot Sheila. yes we have to live for the right moments, indeed !