Moments Are Alive

Moments are colliding against
each other,
everywhere in the time space,
every now and then .

Some are dying ,
Some new are being born.
Moments are coming out of their own wombs,
Triggering a hyper-evolution.

Moments are random ,
Some are losing their way ;
Some are coming back to the right track.

Moments are entities too;
Some are being forgotten ,
Some are becoming endearing in-laws .
Moments, in a nutshell , are
very much like us.

Alert, awakened ;
 In need of proper treatments -
That is how the moments are.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This reminds me of the movie 'Crash,' starring Sandra Bullock, the only similarity being how things collide into one another; or in the case of the movie, they crash. Things seemingly unrelated, always are; and those that you hate the most end up rescuing you in the end. If moments don't collide, we're not living. The alternative would be still and silent.

The ending is a perfect summation: how we must handle with proper care.

[Anand Sehgal]

A review better than the write itself. thanks a lot dear.

[Kt k]

This also reminded me of a movie but the movie the vow and how you live your life waiting for a impact that will change it forever and its moments that are the Tonys have the most impact as whell as the greater ones

[Lydia Shutter]

And every moment counts. Every one has an effect on the next and we must cherish each one. Very wise life advice here, Anand. Lydi**

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot Lydi .. You are always so encouraging :)

[Joiedevivre]

great write! reminded me of something I read once, that in an astrological sense we are each born to sublimate and perfect the moment in which we were born, with all its implications. Great write!

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much dear. I am honored !

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Moments indeed. We are all only what we are in this very moment. Some would argue that there is no tomorrow and there was no yesterday, there is only now...and then now is gone and there is another now. I like the way you've described things here...lots of good connections and ideas in this one.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you dear Sarah.. You are becoming rare day bu day. Is everything alright?

[Vidya Bacchus]

a very interesting piece that makes one think nicely penned

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot Vidya for taking time to read the piece ! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

you are most welcome

[Criss Sole]

Very thought provoking. I enjoyed reading it. I loved your opening line, "Moments are colliding against
each other." Great use of language.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot my friend for the kind review. :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like how you seem to describe moments in life, a realistic write. I like this part in the beginning:
"Moments are colliding against
each other,
everywhere in the time space,
every now and then .

Some are dying ,
Some new are being born.
Moments are coming out of their own wombs,"

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much my friend :)

[EloisaWrites]

Wow. This is very poetic and philosophic and in the most mysterious way, I can relate to it! I love the composition of your lines and the mystery it gives. It's wonderful! :)

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks for spending some time on the piece and for the kind reviews :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was well written and I personally enjoyed it. Very intriguing. xo Winter

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot Winter :)
Love :)

[Gaurav Walia]

Quite an appealing concept and, is well written too...

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much my friend :)