Moments Are Alive

Moments are colliding against
each other,
everywhere in the time space,
every now and then .

Some are dying ,
Some new are being born.
Moments are coming out of their own wombs,
Triggering a hyper-evolution.

Moments are random ,
Some are losing their way ;
Some are coming back to the right track.

Moments are entities too;
Some are being forgotten ,
Some are becoming endearing in-laws .
Moments, in a nutshell , are
very much like us.

Alert, awakened ;
 In need of proper treatments -
That is how the moments are.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This reminds me of the movie 'Crash,' starring Sandra Bullock, the only similarity being how things collide into one another; or in the case of the movie, they crash. Things seemingly unrelated, always are; and those that you hate the most end up rescuing you in the end. If moments don't collide, we're not living. The alternative would be still and silent.

The ending is a perfect summation: how we must handle with proper care.

[Anand Sehgal]

A review better than the write itself. thanks a lot dear.

[Kt k]

This also reminded me of a movie but the movie the vow and how you live your life waiting for a impact that will change it forever and its moments that are the Tonys have the most impact as whell as the greater ones

[Matt Sayer]

Atomic collisions between moments, fusing to become more poignant, more memorable, and splitting to be forgotten in the infinite void. Moments have their own drive, it seems, a mind of their own and an agenda to which they accord. Great poem! :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you so much Matt, Glad that you liked the piece and found substance in it :)

[David Lewis Paget]

Lives are made up of many moments, Anand, but how many do we remember, or indeed, how many are memorable? They seem to pass too quickly to count, but pile up faster than we can deal with them. We can only hope that the ones we make count outnumber the ones we waste.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot sir, for your insightful review :)

[Chandler bing]

so true...I really like the way you think nice work..

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot my friend :)

[Johanna]

Beautiful! I read this at least 5 times, really good job! moments pass by us too fast theese days

[Anand Sehgal]

I am honored Johanna. Thanks a lot for your time :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Some are dying ,
Some new are being born.
Moments are coming out of their own wombs,
Triggering a hyper-evolution."~You encapsulated a thought provoking write, especially this stanza...
I often wonder are we evolving within each moment?...
The optimistic part of me believes so...Well penned!~xoxo~

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot. Love you :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Moments are a rare thing, if we think clearly about it... moments, are just little time-clouds, hanging, and giving us a certain mood, a feeling, a memory, moments are you and me, we all are moments, by breathing even out, it was a moment that passed away... interesting analogy here my friend. Well written.

- Elisa

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much form the kind review. How are you doing now?

You're so welcome my friend, it goes with up's and downs, thanks so much for asking... I will tell you soon more about it in a private message, hope all is well with you my friend. x

[Great Aunt Astri]

You say moments are a bit like us and they are 'in need of proper treatments.' I crtainly agree with that. Interesting to see you are using your science background!

[Anand Sehgal]

Ha ha, I usually try to avoid introducing too much of science, but they keep on sneaking into a write or two :/

[Laura Harrison]

This poem made me think a lot. So much truth in these words

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you, Glad that you liked the piece :)

[ron]

You described moments so wonderfully Anand. Great poem.

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you Ron for the review. Happy Thanksgiving :)

[ron]

Happy Thanksgiving to you to Anand.

[Latifa]

Moments are coming out of their own wombs,
Triggering a hyper-evolution.
I like this lines alot great write

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much my friend :)