Moments Are Alive

Moments are colliding against
each other,
everywhere in the time space,
every now and then .

Some are dying ,
Some new are being born.
Moments are coming out of their own wombs,
Triggering a hyper-evolution.

Moments are random ,
Some are losing their way ;
Some are coming back to the right track.

Moments are entities too;
Some are being forgotten ,
Some are becoming endearing in-laws .
Moments, in a nutshell , are
very much like us.

Alert, awakened ;
 In need of proper treatments -
That is how the moments are.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This reminds me of the movie 'Crash,' starring Sandra Bullock, the only similarity being how things collide into one another; or in the case of the movie, they crash. Things seemingly unrelated, always are; and those that you hate the most end up rescuing you in the end. If moments don't collide, we're not living. The alternative would be still and silent.

The ending is a perfect summation: how we must handle with proper care.

[Anand Sehgal]

A review better than the write itself. thanks a lot dear.

[Kt k]

This also reminded me of a movie but the movie the vow and how you live your life waiting for a impact that will change it forever and its moments that are the Tonys have the most impact as whell as the greater ones

[stars are far]

yes, a moment once its gone, it will never come back, but its memory will always stay alive
well done

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much my dear friend for the kind review :)

[stars are far]

my pleasure

[TL Boehm]

Moments as living things. this is a great concept. Well done.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear TL . How are you doing?

[AYVID N]

The moment in hand is the only moment we have. Life is full of moments multicolored in all the various hues of life. Great thought Anand, uniquely expressed.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot Divya :) I hope we could slow them down !

[Vandana Sharma]

Like autumn leaves moments fall.................so better to cherish them, till they can be.

[Anand Sehgal]

yes, It is important to live in the moments :)

[Saddam]

This is very nice poetry specially in this line you show time will be run at own path-
Some are dying ,
Some new are being born.
Moments are coming out of their own wombs,
Triggering a hyper-evolution.
LOVE THIS

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much my dear friend :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

This is a very interesting, well-crafted, philosophical poem. Great job!

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much dear friend :)

[Sarai Lee]

Life is a series of moments, both terrifying and deeply wonderful. I love how you make the "moments" take on personas in this piece, speaking of moments like people and things that live and exist. It's a lovely image. Well done!

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you again. You made my day :)

[Eddie Phillips]

We live and die in the moment.

[Anand Sehgal]

that's why we should live in the present. Always.

[Frieda P]

Yes we live in and for the moments. I really like how you wrapped your pen around this one Anand.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot Frieda . hope you are doing good :)

[I Am Svetlana]

I loved how you expressed the word "moments" in a different way in each stanza and where they came from. Good metaphors! Moments are moments, but they come in all different shapes, sizes, reflections, etc. They come randomly or as scheduled. but they all mean something, no matter when they happen.

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much my friend for reading :)