A Change, The Change

Once my dreams became verbose ;
I woke up to see that my magic pen was missing.
It was sailing away ,
Riding on the tide,
defining a new era ,
I had lost my artistry by then ;
I realized I was a mere  period.
Periods are never the same.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

This is a very special write for me. It reminded me of writer's block. Writers go through phases of great changing as they are very sensitive individuals and life's events make deep impact on them. I am struggling with it for past several months and I could really connect to all you say in this great poem.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear Divya :)

[The dark story]

Season changes and so do people…and so do fate. A change is sometimes necessary…and for an artist(i my beleif) is quite beneficial though it seems too tough in the first place.
I loved this write.I like the way you fill your verses with wisdom and serenity. Thanks for sharing!!

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you so much Atiba, how are you doing ?

[The dark story]

Welcome. A bit fine,I surmise.

[Tarry Franck]

New beginnings are awaiting - loved it

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you dear Terry

[Tarry Franck]

My pleasure dear

[MikeV]

I loved this, that ending was brilliant :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot Mike for the Visit :D

[Pryde Foltz]

No, periods are not the same. But they can signify a new beginning. Wait something new is on the way.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot dear Pryde for your kind support :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Sometimes the lost things are found again... I like the idea of this one; a magic pen sailing away--I've felt this way at times.

Suggestion: "I realized I was (a) mere period."

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you dear Sarah for pointing out the glitch. How are you ?

[Ruth]

Oh damn, yeah, know that feeling...a moment captured is a moment sang....this is beautiful x

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank so you so much dear Poppy, Love :)

[MsJewel]

You do have a magic pen. This is lovely

:) Julie

[Anand Sehgal]

I am honored Julie :)

[Gaurav Walia]

It is in itself- a piece of art.. It's beautiful...

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so much gaurav :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am glad to see your "magic pen" has emerged, Anand. Wishing you well in your lovely India!

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot dear Kelly