Etcetera 4

An unmindful , grazing Zebra;

A shocking holy bath;

Magic and a shivering donkey !

Heaps of worn, cliched masks ;

A predestined, welcome gale;

Gales of loud laughter !

A single spotlight and many men;

A goldfish and two male cats;

A meteor coming closer !

Increasing breathing rate ;

Perspiration, a glass half full ;

Bed sheet with patterned

stains of salt !

Reviews

[EloisaWrites]

This is one very random party! While I am still trying to worry about the Zebra becoming the donkey, I am smitten by the goldfish and two male cats. :D
Kidding aside, I love your crowd and the way you describe their pretense and many masks. It is beautifully absurd and very enjoyable. :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a ton. Glad that you got the chaos right ! :)

[MikeV]

Great write, very thought provoking! :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks friend, Glad that you liked :)

[Pryde Foltz]

So much to fear. Most of it fiction. Great write.

[Anand Sehgal]

you got it right ! insecurities every-where, just like spread-it butter :)

[Sheila Kline]

And so it goes on and on........shall we ever be able to untwist the messes we create, the confusion we cause, the results gone wrong by our own doing? A hodgepodge of items much like the way a day may unfold for us!
Creative!!

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you Sheila for the comment. Yes life is a collage of granular images and symbols

[shallimarRose]

A beautiful Zebra with a shivering jackass...? This was very interesting to me. Many layers. The goldfish and the beautiful Zebra I think are metaphorically the same woman and the two male cats represents the territorial feel of two men ? A three way? LOL ok I lost my train of thought. Love the form.. shallimarRose

[Anand Sehgal]

Zebra to Jackass transformation via a bath only ! isn't the magic cool ? :P

[shallimarRose]

Loved this piece it was fun trying to figure it out. xo