Vital force

Life itself is an ever- changing portrait.
The frame remains as it is..,
only the content gets altered; 
very clinically, by the 'Ultimate Artist' high above..!
Every night , a magnificent magician comes down silently ,
to edit the area inscribed in the frame.
When the morning beams peep in, 
we get to see a totally new picture altogether..!!
New colors keep on mesmerizing us every single day, 
every single moment.
This very amazement drives our life,
This element of surprise fosters
the "Imaginative Horses" inside our dynamic minds,
our eternal souls;
Here lies the auspicious secret of the " Vital force".

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Excellent write, the vital force is in constant momentum and changing life second to second, if we can put our soul to the editor and make a melody conjointly, wow a heaven on earth, but world is in pandemonium and too nosy, you have to be a keen listener of your soul to be one with the inner vital force, enjoyed fully

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear, for the kind review :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Splendid read and write...:)

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that you liked :)

[NA]

Love this...wonderful piece :) x

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot friend :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Very nice. I often ponder on where artistic inspiration comes from

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you Pryde :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Every night , a magnificent magician comes down silently ,
to edit the area inscribed in the frame...

This is an uplifting view of the renewal that occurs each morning. I enjoyed this imagery!

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that you liked the imagery :) thank you so much Ma'am :)

[Angel Bella]

Keep me update :D Thumbs Up )

[Anand Sehgal]

Sure thing my friend :D

[mess of gorgeous chaos]

I find this poem so intriguing.. and definitely well written. Im probably not going to look at the day by day life the same anymore, you have really altered my perspective. Love how you word things like "magnificent magician", "dynamic minds", etc, it really adds to it. Overall, amazing!

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that you liked it, Thank you friend :)

[Dana Alsamsam]

there are so many beautiful visions in this world that humans travel too fast to see! something so beautiful is simply the way the world looks different each day even though we view it from the same lens. it is a wonderful thing that you can appreciate these subtle differences in this life. great work!

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot friend for kind comments :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

An interesting way to view the new day... The frame remains the same, but the picture is every changing; the eternal revolving door of sorts. Of course, for many the picture is always the same; those trapped within the confines of mundanity, but for those who are truly able to see the details, life is an every changing portrait. I think this is the essence of poetry...seeing the world through the eyes of another.

[Anand Sehgal]

Yes, the idea is to appreciate the continuous change , the gradual reformation.

[K. Louis]

I wonder about that frame remaining as it is..
but I'll never get tired of how people view the world around them. :)

[Anand Sehgal]

The world is so beautiful. Its the best creation of the Ultimate Artist high above .

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this..reminds me of "the portrait of dorian gray"

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that you liked :), thank you Jacob :)