Puddles

I tell him not to jump in it,

(he’s just changed his pants and

I’ll have to take him back to his father all wet)

but he doesn’t listen.

He shrieks with delight as water splashes up into his boots

I open my mouth to protest but then,

He grins like sunshine.

Reviews

[kara_marissa]

Simplicity is so enjoyable. Kudos on a very well written piece.

[Anais K.V]

Thank you!

[disheveledApathy]

Ah, the joys of childhood. Love the comparison at the end, it was the perfect touch on a perfect moment. ;D

[Anais K.V]

Thanks!

[disheveledApathy]

Welcome!

[CreativeStroke]

Sweet, simple pleasures that make every child smile. This was beautifully written. I love the captivation of a moment in a child's young life. Well done!

[Anais K.V]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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well done! :-)

i thoroughly enjoy this style, and you've done it to a T.

thanks for sharing

[Anais K.V]

Thanks very much!

[teardrop]

such a darling write. enjoyed

[Anais K.V]

I'm glad :)