Empty

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A Poem by Anais K.V

Dust

And a letter on my nightstand,

Unreadable print, saying

I will always love you.

Now,

dust

And a letter on my nightstand.

© 2013 Anais K.V


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Author's Note

Anais K.V
This poem came from a prompt of a single word, in this case used as the title. Not sure why it went the direction it did, but I hope you dig it.

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There is a subtle twist to this one, I think. I am still trying to get the full gist of it. It seems to be saying to me, right or wrong, that the love spoken of/about here has, over time, turned to dust and has now become only "..a letter on my nightstand." Am I even close? No matter, I loved it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Anais K.V

11 Years Ago

You got it :)
Yes dust and love, the greatness of life is amazing. Also the fleeting perspectives.

Posted 11 Years Ago


i love it, it's simple and easy to follow!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 13, 2013
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Tags: Prompts, letter, love, sad

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Anais K.V
Anais K.V

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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