come

To bed.

He sighs it softly,

grazing my shoulder

with his calloused hand.

Come to bed.

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

A moment of promised rest and togetherness. Beautiful, Anais. I always appreciate the succinct forms; how they can say so much with so little by letting the reader fill in the details from their own experiences.. as you have permitted here. Thank you! :)

[Pixieblue]

You can picture this happening without trying.
Just as you read each word its like your seeing a second of two lovers lives.

[.]

almost a cinquain...

nice, tender poem.
good job

[teardrop]

love this so well written

[Anais K.V]

Thanks! (I quite like this one.. don't tell! :) )

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

You have a bright future as a poet, I do not doubt it!

[Anais K.V]

Thank you!