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OH!

OH!

A Poem by Ana_Cristina
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some lyrics :)

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Hey boy!

I like the way you dress your toys,

Every time I look at you it's like an asteroid...

hitting the ground and making up a beatbox,

You're in my mind showing me how your body rocks.

 

You're making me go crazy,

Making my mind go numb,

Won't take a second baby,
come here and give me some.

 

Oh, oh, oh!

I think you'd really like to know, know, know,

My body's willing to let go, go, go.

Are you willing to have a ride?
And explore everything inside?

 

Uh-oh,
I can't control myself when you're with me,

put your hand on my waist, come close to my body,

The time is ticking, I just want to do it properly,

no time to do it slowly.

 

You're making me go crazy,
making my mind go numb,
won't take a second baby,
come here and give me some.

 

Oh, oh, oh!
I think you'd really like to know, know, know,
My body's willing to let go, go, go.
Are you willing to have a ride?
And explore everything inside...?

Take my hand an walk with me,

The time you take matters to me,

I care if you are not around,
without you I can't work this out.

 

Oh, oh, oh!

I think you'd really like to know, know, know,

My body's willing to let go, go, go.

Are you willing to have a ride?

and explore everything inside?

Oh, oh, oh!

I think I have something to show, show, show,

Just come with me and let's go low, low, low.

Are you willing to have a ride?

And explore everything inside?

© 2010 Ana_Cristina


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aha this is amazing some of the best lyrics ive seen lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very passionate! I didn't read the description to begin with, and I thought these would be cool lyrics for a song. And then I read it and saw that indeed they are! Nice work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahh.. Nice =D Am wondering where the inspiration for this came from ;) And who it is about? :P Lol... xD
Good work ;)
[M]

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good so far ;)
I assume you're going to continues your work on this later on today? :P
If so, lemme know! :L I wanna read the rest of this this for sure :P
Well done, good write ;)
[M]

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really good so far.
I like the first verse. Very good.
I can not wait to read more...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Ana_Cristina
Ana_Cristina

Peterborough, dogsthorpe, United Kingdom



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