Why Me

This is actually a song. It's about a moment of pain in my life, and the only way I could deal was to write. This is what came out.

 

Verse 1

Every time I see your smile

My heart gives a stutter

And even though it’s been a while

I still feel a shudder

A hug is what I crave the most

A gesture just for me

Though my friends don’t mean to boast

I feel the jealousy.

Chorus

Why me? What gives you the control?

How did you get it? When did it show?

Why me? Who gives you the control?

To steal away that part of me and leave a gaping hole.

Verse 2

An emptiness I have inside

One only you can fill

Times again I’ve tried and tried

To hold you is my will

And yet the worst part of it all

The dagger bringing pain

Is internal struggle, emotional stall

Knowledge you don’t care the same

 

Chorus (edited)

Why me? What did I do wrong?

How did I lose you? When was I not strong?

Why me? When did I go wrong?

‘Cause now instead of seeing you I’m writing up this song.

 

Whisper: Why me?

Author's Note

Let me know what you thought of the message and maybe some comments on the rhyme scheme.

Reviews

[Disturbed mind]

eh...i don't know what to say...it seems that you're passing through a bad moment...beautiful writing i wish i could hear the song...really great...