Light

Light

A Poem by Riley Mistwood
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Out of the darkness comes a light
A breath taking Angel, a beautiful sight.

A hand reaches out and I take hold,
A new path before me begins to unfold.

I take the first steps, my heart it pounds.
The blood rushing through me the only sounds.

There he stands my guiding star.
The savior of my broken heart.

I turn to see the darkness grow.
Engulfed in demons is the world I used to know.

Now you and I walk hand in hand,
Towards the light, the promised land.

My heart I give to you to hold.
My dreams I watch as they unfold.

My Angel, my love, my guiding light,
I am forever yours until the end of time.

© 2013 Riley Mistwood


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It's a very good poem... and I know why the last two lines don't rhyme... and it's OK. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Riley Mistwood

11 Years Ago

Thank you ; )
Sweet dudet very sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago


Riley Mistwood

11 Years Ago

Gracias
i agree on the last two lines..make them rhyme or at least use near rhyme...that would be good...

but this love poem transcends to the spiritual...the strongest kind of love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Riley Mistwood

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Riley,you have created a wonderful piece.
Its rhymes charmed my heart.
You may strive to make rhyming of the last two lines for matching with other rhymed pairs
of lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Riley Mistwood

11 Years Ago

Thank you
zainul

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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