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Books

A Poem by Riley Mistwood

Upon this mound of books I stand.

A Queen of the grandest land.

 

A crown of words adorns my head

and in my hand the mighty pen

The slayer of the bravest men

 

Inside my mind a key I hold

to unlock stories yet untold

 

Oh what wonders lay ahead

tucked away inside my head

 

My hands create a treasure map

to guide you to my soul and back

 

On my mound of books I stand

the Queen of my imagination land

© 2012 Riley Mistwood


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I loved this poem. All the words fit perfectly.
Well done!


Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahoy, Cap'n Riley! Midshipman Ufi Attorri, reporting. Permission to come aboard. ^_^ I'm so glad you dropped by today with your kind hello-review. It was all the motivation I needed to walk outside my demesne and see that you've moved into the neighborhood, just across the field of dreams, standing there on your "mound of books." I so adore that regal headpiece, the way it pulses with the wonder-light of thought. How could you guess that I would so gleefully spy that well-crafted treasure map in your hand and immediately wish to sign on as crewman on what is sure to be a fantastic voyage? You know me well, my Queen. Stand tall and proud at the helm with mighty pen in hand and direct this willing reader-crewman where thou wilt'st. The sails billow, filling with imagination and beckon us onward with the strength of this poem's color and well-crafted image.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Riley Mistwood

12 Years Ago

Glad to have you on board! Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I appreciate. I cannot wait .. read more
This is simplistically beautiful. I liked it very much, nice vocabulary. There are some weird flow moments, if you know what I mean. I don't think that's a big problem though for such an elegant piece.:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


so quaint and easy to read...popped into the mouth like a little jaffa cake and hit the spot just right

Posted 12 Years Ago


Riley Mistwood

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the wonderful review
I believe you do love books! What a fitting poem....

Posted 12 Years Ago


Riley Mistwood

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
"Oh what wonders lay ahead
tucked away inside my head

My hands create a treasure map
to guide you to my soul and back" Favorite lines!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Riley Mistwood

12 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Riley Mistwood
Riley Mistwood

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