Chapter 1

You Suck!

That's what it would say on the screwed up papper people would throw at me.

You don't belong here, you're waste!

My eyes would flood with tears as my class and others would aproach me, looking at me with the daggers in their eyes.
None was ever nice to the emo kid. None would ever want to be my friend.
Except my one friend Matt we had been friends since we were 12, then he moved away. Im 16 now and we have lost contact from each other.
I still think about him, I wonder how he would look now, I wonder if we would ever meet again.

But im S**t!
As my class would say if i ever told them about Matt.

Its session 5 now just after lunch and i have to grab some books from my locker to take to class with me.
People in My class would use marker to write stuff all over my locker.

On my way to my class i noticed a kid, a emo kid walking into my class, i have never seen him before he must be new, he looked at me and smiled, my face lit up, he is the most gorgous guy i have ever seen,
he was so hot with his black emo hair and his big blue crystal eyes.
i smiled back.

As i enterd the room i noticed the emo boy was just standing next to the door.
I past all of my class mates and headed to the back of the room and sat down.
The emo boy was looking at me for a moment, he started walking towards the back of the room heading for me.
He sat in the chair next to me.

Reviews

[Katreya]

Firstly, welcome to writerscafe, :)

Your writing is expressive and it has a good story line, representing a different view of children in high school. There are a lot of grammar errors though which would be worth checking - even just copying and pasting this into Word would show you a lot of them. Picking these out and changing some words around will make this piece much more presentable and professional - I'll get the ball rolling for you.

papper - Meant to be Paper.
"you're waste!"