Drowning Dreams

I drown in my dreams

Submerged by it's body

Unable to breathe

Panic violently shakes me

Unconsciously dying

Deeper and deeper

The depths begin to darken

The light grows weaker

With seconds left

Still holding my breathe

I awake in time

I awake from Death

Reviews

[Country Girl47]

This was a great poem. I could really feel the emotions here. Can relate to it. Ty, for sharing!

[Amy J]

Thank you so much!

[Country Girl47]

Yw

[bsheph06]

I have had many dreams like this, great poem

[Amy J]

I'm sorry to hear that, but thank you so much!

[willweb]

This was very deep and had a lonely feel to it, but your ending closed it out perfectly. Very nicely penned.

[Amy J]

Thank you so much :)

[Olumegbon]

Fascinating. Short and deep in meaning

[Amy J]

Thank you!

[Einstein Noodle]

great subject matter!! have you looked up the meaning of water in our dreams .. it is fascinating!! .. could barely make it to the conclusion of your poem for my gasping .. wonderful gift of short and powerful poetry .. i love it!
E.

[Amy J]

Thank you E!

[Lizardo]

That endind, Masterpiece, Another great poem.

[Amy J]

Thank you so much :) always love reading your feedback!