Paint Me

-A Brush....A Color.....-

 

 

 

Start with my eyes

for they are my

soul’s window

 

Cover my Canvas 

With bright colors

To make me smile

 

Paint me a country

road with blue skies

above my head

 

Early spring with

Honey bees and

fields of daisies

 

An old tree swing

overlooking a

bubbling creek

 

Paint my heart

red covered by

a cotton dress

 

Completed only

when you see me

in your dreams

 

-Paint Me-

 

 

Reviews

[jakelsen]

Very nice. Simple but effective imagery. Love the colors.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Just beautiful simple poem, I loved it, Yossi

[~*a beautiful disaster*..]

this is a very creative piece. and i feel that adding color to certain words applied that little something extra to the piece.

[Silver_Moon]

I love what you did here! Very creative! I love the colors you put into those words. I can picture clearly what you want thisperson to paint for you. I do believe that we are all looking for someone like this. Someone who will paint us.. not because of our beauty outside but what is inside us... the love we elude to everybody. :)

[Dani California]

Oh I love this! :) Yay! I paint.. so this piece really appeals to me. I love how you incorporated the colors. Very creative! And the poem itself is wonderful. Great flow and imagery... awesome use of metaphor Amy :) I feel a hint of seduction as well ... sensual.

Beautifully done!