Her Song

We all have a song of our own....What key of life shall we sing in?

 

Little girl afraid to write,

scared to look into

the night

 

Shadows cast a sign

of doom, why must

she die

 

Far from earth, she

she cries as she falls

from grace

 

 

No one to hear

her lonely heart

beating...

 

Bring forth the

Key to open

Her eyes

 

Take her hand

and save her

life

 

Walk down the

moonlight path

forever

 

-Her Song-

      me

Reviews

[Prudence Desideria]

It's a very interesting idea, def intriguing.... Like the start, "scared to write"... As far as formatting and such, might be worth a bit of extra editing (the repetition of she for example), and just cleaning it up a little, cause it's good a really good vibe to it throughout and great potential... That soudns awful, doesn't it. Okay, so re-phrasing, it's a great piece, and with some sprucing it'll be quite impressive :)