Run

Slowly I pick my pace up....

 

Walking slowly, I turn

only to look back

where I began

 

Nervous inside I try to

think why I left my

comfort zone

 

Always staying inside

the lines, I never

questioned life

 

Opening one eye at

a time, I realize

life goes on

 

My pulse races as

my pace turns to

a slow jog

 

Passing beautiful

horizons I've never

seen before

 

Wonderful faces

smile as I stroll

them by

 

Journeys around

every corner

excite me

 

Glancing down,

I notice no more

walking

 

....RUN

Reviews

[Cliff Rhodes]

I am a jogger on and off, mostly in warm weather, but this one reminds me of the nice rhythmic pace and once in a while I feel like a deer and have to sprint for life.

[Dorchadas]

I love the flow... the wording but most of all the positivity. The intoxicity of feeling that revival of life and spirt.
Beautiful.

[jakelsen]

The pace and the imagery are consistent, the words pound out a beat that matches the theme. Another good piece.

[Silver_Moon]

Moreover, it now describes what I am feeling and what I am experiencing now. Nice job! :)

[TL Boehm]

the rush of life as it floods the senses. Beautifully written

[Robert Luna]

This made for a wonderful read. I love the flowing feel of this as it carried like the wind or a soft whisper in my ear. I think this was so perfectly written as it gave a reader such a vivid image of something more than just words on a page. I love the connection I could feel to it.


Great Job!!!!!!!!

[Silver_Moon]

wow! nice poem. it describes me in some time of my life. Hahaha!!!
Good work. :)