Two Suns

"I walked into the morning mist..... I opened my eyes and found two suns... You and I.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Brilliant, morning sky 

wakes my sleepy

eyes

 

Pastel blue clouds

covered in sharp

color of reds

 

Inhaling deeply

I feel the presence

of your soul

 

Take my spirit

and smile for

the day

 

Cover my life

with endless

sunsets

 

Together we

see life’s

beauty

 

Sunrise.....

Sunset.....

-Two Suns-

Reviews

[Cliff Rhodes]

.......two suns and two worlds are common among people not blinded by their own selfishness.....I admit that it also took me a while to see both.

nice poem

[jakelsen]

Amy,

The imagery is crisp and clear and the emotions evocative. Nice work.

Jeanie

[Dani California]

This is a truly lovely piece. So much love expressed here....

"Inhaling deeply
I feel the presence
of your soul

Take my spirit
and smile for
the day"

Beautiful!!

[TL Boehm]

this has a grace to it. Like a psalm or a song. Beautiful poetry.

[~*a beautiful disaster*..]

this is an awesome write with really great imagery. i like it a lot.

[Silver_Moon]

I can feel the fresh breeze of the air as I read through your poem.. Love it. Keep it up! :)