Circle

"Put me there in the center so I can never leave you"

 

Cross the line 

to enter my

soul

 

Inside, you'll find

yourself wanting

more of me

 

Lay with me in

the middle of

our world

 

Counting stars

as they fall

around us

 

Close your eyes

and listen to my

heart beat

 

Never ending

circle I give to

you my love

 

-I give you... me-

 

    

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

The great thing about circles is there is no "end"....round and round and you are still caught in the middle unless you jump out.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

that's true. This poem is nicely 'rounded' though. pardon the pun. Romantic - but not too far out of balance.

[jakelsen]

Interesting. It evokes the feeling of being suspended in space, surrounded by stars.