U Turn

U turned away....Not me. The good thing about "U" is that when you get to the top, you have to turn around and come back....

 

Tall flowers

bloom in

color

 

-Red-

 

 My heart

slowly

beats

 

-Is Love-

 

 

Tears roll

down my

face

 

-Escaping-

 

Take my

hand for

a walk

 

-To Be Free-

 

Never ending

sunsets we

see

 

-Together-

 

  -U Turn........

n you'll find.....me-

Author's Note

My writing is of the moment at times.... feeling arise and I put them on paper. U turns happen in life sometimes....but it just makes us ready for the next letter of the alphabet.

Reviews

[Dani California]

I love your analogies in your tag and your note. The poem is wonderful Amy. I don't know how I missed it previously. I also like how you incorporate color into it. It puts emphasis on the meaning of the poem. Love is red escaping to be free together. :)

Lovely as always!

[TL Boehm]

this one is simply stated yet hopeful. A nice lift of words...well written.

[Enigma]

'Circular motion' is boring when talked about in terms of physics. *yawn*
But over here *gets excited*
Circular motion is what life is all about. Things come....and go....and then they come back again. This year I found two of my long lost friends who had went away to live in another city. And both of them took me by surprise....hehehe
Life does bring back good things...
Back to the poem...
This was a very beautiful, colourful, mesmerizing, stunning, awesome, superb....*thinks*
hmmm...
Fantastic, amazing, to the point,...
Ok! I'll keep it short..
It was a great piece. I loved it!!
You got great talent, dear friend. Keep it up!!!

[jakelsen]

Life is circular sometimes. If we wait long enough, those things we love will return to us.