Hole

Hole

A Poem by Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
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"The hole you left in my heart, allowed me to venture into a new world"..... "Thank you"

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Hole in my heart

Dark light shines

Shall I Go?

 

Memories torn

Precious friend

Must I feel?

 

Sea Salt tears

High tides

Why?

 

Journey.....

A New Land.....

My New Life.....

 

Thank you

for the hole

in my heart.

 

     -me-  

 

© 2008 Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"


Author's Note

Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
The hole left in my heart after my mother's passing.... I consider this her way of allowing me to venture into a new world.... I consider this hole never to be filled yet only for "me" to enter into this world of a new life... -me.-

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Beautifully stated. Without those spaces in our hearts and souls we become so full we cannot absorb anything else.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm sorry for your loss Amy. I believe loss is the most difficult thing we have to endure in this life, though we do mend, and we do keep moving. This is not our eternal life, so we all will meet up again with our loves. There really isn't reason too despair other than the fact that we will miss them here -- in this form. But they remain in heart until we see them again.

I enjoyed this poem. A new start is good... healthy... fresh beginning.
I love the way you've expressed all of this. Excellent writing..



Posted 16 Years Ago


We all learn from pain and loss, although the lessons are hard. I still miss my father every day, and he died ten years ago. You put it very nicely here. Good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"

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