Step

I was taught how to walk..... I do not need your help.

 

 

-Step-

 

Move out of my way

I am walking on

my own feet

 

-Step-

 

My rainbow is but

a few clouds away

for me to see

 

-Step-

 

No time limits,

Free to run in the rain

Star gazing by night

 

-Step-

 

Traveling new roads

meeting new souls

with smiles

 

-Step-

 

This is my place

This is my time

This is....

 

My step.

    me

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

I have read many of your works that were sad, lonely...but this one has a wonderful LIFT to it! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

[Reika]

oooh! I really like this,
the "step" between each stanza,
I totally agree that it could be easily turned into a song.
I loved the beat
and I love the feel of the poem.
=)

[jakelsen]

I really like this. It has a very musical beat, and could easily be made into a song. It's very upbeat and positive.

[Touché Armada]

Ohhhhh I love it thanks for sending it... I just found something like this around here,, sort of like this...

with no hope for an end we can only hope for change.
Quoteable quote I think for a long living planet.

Kind of goes with your theme I think... We have to be here cause we're here, so yeah we should be in step with our own step.