Beautiful

 

Sunny skies outlined

 

with cotton candy

clouds

 

-Beautiful-

 

Starry night casually

dressed by a big

harvest moon

 

-Beautiful-

 

Midnight by the sea

with rolling waves

and moon beams

 

-Beautiful-

 

Bubbly creek with

chirping birds flying

happily

 

-Beautiful-

 

Looking into your

eyes and reading

your heart

 

-Beautiful-

 

*Twas Love At First Sight... Love By Night... Oh To Be Loved*

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dani California]

*Twas Love At First Sight... Love By Night... Oh To Be Loved*

Lovely!
The entire poem was enchanting..
love inspiring...

"Looking into your
eyes and reading
your heart..."


This makes me want to be
in love.... sigh.

Beautiful Amy. Truly beautiful work....

[Brianna Brie]

Bubbly creek with
chirping birds flying
happily

Sweet! Love inspired for sure. The feeling of awe when in the presence of love is captured nicely in this poem. Great job.

[Emily Rose]

Again, wonderous imagery. I especially like "Starry night casually/dressed by a big/harvest moon:" you personify the night in an interesting and original way. The other stanzas are not quite as original, but you get your point across in a lovely manner. Well done.

[Reika]

The title says it all; Beautiful. =)
It's simple and I love the way it flows.
It has a wonderful, light, airy feeling to it; just as I would imagine love at first sight would feel.

[Michael]

Amy, This is a very nice expression of the feeling of love at first sight. I really like the stanza breaks with 'beautiful" It adds a punch to it. One thing to think about, would replacing "rushing" with "rolling" in the third stanza better keep with the feel you wish to convey? I only ask because it is the only word that seems in a hurry. Of course, that may be your intent, just a thought.