Moon Drifters

"And there was a beautiful soul I met....I know not where he came from but we are destined to journey the beautiful world together."

 

 

Balance you’ll find,

Desires hidden in

hollow dreams

 

Reaching for unknown

boundaries ignite

hearts on fire

 

Read my mind when

I close my eyes as I

dream of journeys

 

Lead me there,

Share the beauty

of our spirits

 

Feel my soul with

the touch of my

hand in yours

 

You and I are

after the same

heartbeats

 

Be my eyes as

I shall be your

soul’s blanket

 

Journey with me

until the sun

sets no more

 

-Moon Drifters-

Author's Note

Long journey's in life I hope to find with you.... Eternal friendship forever...means more than any material things life could give us. Explore the beauty of the world!

Reviews

[Dani California]

Ahhh...this is so beautiful.
You've captured the essence of love and friendship
wonderfully...

And yes, I agree..
material means nothing. nada.
replaceable.
comes and goes.

People however... cannot be replaced.
So if you find your soulmate... or a true eternal
friendship....

Hold on ..
cherish it..
and take that eternal ride all the way.. :)

Awesome write!

[TL Boehm]

Nicely penned - the short lines work well in this piece to convey the message.

[Touché Armada]

After the same heartbeats, thats priceless.
A lovely write, really.
Measures pulse with thunb... Um yep it was mine all along tehehehe (just thinking about my pillow, and how I sometimes make it live) :)

[jakelsen]

Very nice imagery. This is a lovely poem. The emotion shines through.

[Enigma]

WoW!! I agree. This was truly enchanting...
I love the imagery you've used. Marvellous....
I loved it!!! Great Write!!

[Dorchadas]

This is so beautiful Amy... enchanting and pure... wow... love the sentiment ;)