Pretend

Pretend

A Poem by Amy
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This peom describes how if you're smiling or someone else is smiling, it doesn't mean they're happy. "You can see many smiles everyday, but you can never know whose world is actually upside down."

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Smile at him so you look happy 
When you talk to her sound preppy 
When no one is looking you can cry 
When no one can hear, you can scream and dramatically sigh 
Smile at your family so they don't question you 
Quietly cry yourself to sleep so they never hear too 
Remember to pretend 
Force yourself to feel okay even when you can barely stand 
Wipe away your tears so no one knows 
Look like a happy girl who just got a new bow 
Don't show them the real you, you'll just scare them away 
Hiding your emotions is how you will always stay.

© 2018 Amy


Author's Note

Amy
Critize me as much as you would like. I want constructive critizism.

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You just summed up everybody in the world.
We all grin and bare it at some point.
But someone smiling is also pleasant.
Though, some just don't show any feeling at any time.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This sounds like me, I loved the way you worded this and brought the feeling to life.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is so wonderful, like the emotions.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amy

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Amazing job!!! Sometimes just throwing a smile is the best thing to do to hide wat is inside!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amy

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

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