Mr Edwards Funeral...

Based on a true event, it was not me thank goodness!

I promised to attend this funeral,
So I guess you have to go,
His name was Mr Edwards,
Little about him I know,
I rushed to the crematorium
Some of these women staring at me,
Did not think ought of it,
Just thought i'd let it be,
Stood in the stalls for it to begin,
The doors on the place shut tight,
It was only then It dawned on me
I was at the funeral of Mr Wight,
The songs began so I had to sing,
Embarrassed I curled up inside,
Now I know the women staring at me,
Thought I was his bit on the side.

Reviews

[Marie]

Funny. I'm glad it wasn't you.

[Amy Azra Dean]

And me! thankyou for the review :)

[Rita L. Sev]

A well written piece - amusing way to make the most of an embarrassing situation! Thanks for sharing!

[Amy Azra Dean]

Thankyou for reading my poetry, thanks! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Light noted upon death. A well written poem...:)

[Amy Azra Dean]

Thankyou very much for the review! And for taking the time to read my poetry, glad you enjoyed it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Holly Mason]

even for a true event this is a good write
the flow of it makes it more then readable
like the creativity and well placed words
thank you for sharing truly

[Amy Azra Dean]

Thankyou very much Im so glad you enjoyed it! thanks for the feedback :)

[Alex Falkner]

Very humourous, liked this very much.
Bit on the side. :) love it

[Amy Azra Dean]

Oh Im glad you liked it and found it humourous, thankyou for the review :)

[Shannen Forrester]

Brilliant poem, I love a little tombstone humor as I call it.
flows beautifully, lighthearted and worth a chuckle
Keep it up :)

[Amy Azra Dean]

I am to make people chuckle or slightly smile at least if i can :) yes a bit of Tombstone humour! thanks for the feedback :)

[Emily Feret]

Did not think ought of it,
Just thought i'd let it be

This phrase just really jumped out at me, I like the way it was written

I love the surprise ending!!

[Amy Azra Dean]

Im glad you liked the ending, it worked then :) thanks for the ongoing feedback :)