Little Love Note

Little Love Note

A Poem by Amy

Do I really need to compare?

Am I not better then the rest?

Maybe if I'm angry, not loving but demanding.

Condemed for being hopeful, my optimisim urks you.

My stomach wrenched. My disgust oozes. I wanna punk my memories of you.

Maybe I should tap into all the pain that you took with you.

I'm sorry that I strived to be so f*****g kind.

Sick of all all these lies, your selfish betraying eyes.

How dare you think I'm not worthy of your love.

How dare you think you're better then me.

Never will you take my love for weakness.

I am too strong for you, just think, who was crying?

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Amy


Author's Note

Amy
A little angry when I wrote this, still yet I am too kind.
Please add your comments. I appreciate constructive criticism.

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Added on July 7, 2010
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Amy
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