Just "a" drop

A drop 
from the deep-sea

Of those pains and angst
breaks out

Glides down…

All the rebellions
of the hard ‘heart’,

Pauses

Holds the unfathomable breath,

Unease tentacles

The gorge between

The eyes and the heart

 

Lost thoughts
Dilemma
Hits,

Beats,
trembles,
And

Bursts out
from the guiltless eyes
Just "a" drop of tears…

Reviews

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice poem..

[PokemonFan#1]

Ah! Another beautiful poem. It was a very touching one. Keep it up!

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

Is a tear truly the substance of ones vision freeing itself in the only way possible? This inspires me to think so..

[Amila Jay]

Amazing write:)

[sivan]

Bursts out
from the guiltless eyes
This is the most powerful line in the poem... Good read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words and a beautiful artwork.
"Unease tentacles
The gorge between
The eyes and the heart"
A very good ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote

[Blake]

The poem is as great as the picture lol. Nice write and great job on this!

[Casper]

This is really good! Short, but powerful.

[nishalization]

Simply very in depth.. Lovi it