The Bubble

                                                                                                       

You

The ‘bubble’

The lathered world…

a sphere of an Illusion!

Flimsy,Fragile,

is your character

Vibrant, yours temperament,
Puffed up
Nothing in this world 

can limit your steps

You go Dancing and

Stirring the happiness, 
Force us for lofty dream
by yours appealing 
bright fantasy world
We run behind you 
To craft our fate
But

Alas
we are left

with

An unfilled bliss

You were just an imaginary -

A silk world...
Touch and
Ruptures in no second
with no reminiscence

For a keepsake
 the bubble vanishes …

Amrita "Ams"

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Ach, maybe poems are like the bubble you describe also. We inflate them, capture others' interest and then ... pop ... we are gone. Ach, we are fraudsters. But having said that said others dooooo love to chase the bubbles we inflate. Being a poet is maybe a cynical business. But then if that business brings momentary happiness, or even the illusion of happiness are we really so bad?

[zainul]

Bubble is transient.
So is human life.
Hence bubble is human!

[Amrita Sharma Pokharel]

True said.

[zainul]

Thanks

[PokemonFan#1]

Beautiful! I loved it. Keep it up!

[Emily B]

lovely, lovely

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Keen interested to play with the Bubbles A miracle of the wonder tender eyes and to explain very near to us the whole world and rainbows, nice job.......

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem is filled with imagination and creativity. I love the artwork you found to go with this piece. It seems like the woman is the creator of life and she is blowing bubbles creating new adventures. You poem goes well with it and sometimes it seems as if fate is not on our side.

[bobby]

I like your reach and effort to find right words to achieve your poetic calling. There are wonderful constructed lines here I enjoyed the poem The Bubble

[kewlbluetiger]

A whimsical write that I really enjoyed! You really captured the frailties of life in a fun way with pretty bubbly imagery.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Sis..it was a pleasant surprise for me...we talked about the bubble in our last call..and you wrote a poem on it...that's to an awe-inspiring and mind blowing...Great you are and so is your write...

Lots of love to you , Ams :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The artwork made your words have life. I like the emotion and feel of this poem. You create a good place in your words. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote