God Bless America

God Bless America

 

World can say, whatever they think

or want, we are born free and ruled

them all, a land blessed by the Lord

our motto is simple, in God we trust

 

We welcome all religions, respect them

believe in equality, humanity we care

provide asylum to those who need

a land chosen by God, to make him proud

 

Our men and women in uniforms are

the bravest from all, we don't forget

enemy we find, even we have to invade

a foreign country, we hunt them down

 

Donations, aids and charities we provide

still those countries treat us like ungrateful wives

we stand with weak, fight most evil enemies

which are barbarians, untamed beasts and freaks

 

Lord be with our leaders, give wisdom to all

let all of us be united, like one strong family

we are proud to be Americans, because

in freedom we believe, God bless America

 

Till there is sun, moon and stars, I pray to God

my flag stay on top, until the end of time let USA

be blessed with Prosperity, one strong united nation

the leader of the world, hear my little prayer my Lord!

 

A. Amos

Author's Note

Happy 4th of July

Reviews

[Phantom Heart]

I like that this view is positive. So many people complain about how terrible it is. I am always like, yes no one is perfect and the past was unfair and unkind, but we are moving in the right direction. And look at the rest of the world. There's so much disease, famine, genocide, infanticide, war and poverty! I tell people that we are spoiled. They have no idea what harsh conditions are ad are lucky to not have bombs blowing up innocent homes and kids. Thanks for writing.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Morgan...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well AA I can feel your love and pride in your country from this write.Excellent poetry my friend :)

[A. Amos]

Thank you Vidya...

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[ThatWriterGirl]

I won't comment on the theme of this poem, since I'm not from America. But I will say that I like the imagery and that I think you're a good poet,

[A. Amos]

Thank you Thatwritergirl...

[Leslie Philibert]

I have decided to remove my comments here.

[A. Amos]

I'm not here to discuss politics, thank you for stopping by and sharing your mind I love my country and always will, if I will write something; then you will say Americans are rude. Intrinsically we are not, its just our honest attitude!

[Eddie Davis]

A nice, patriotic poem, good job.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Eddie...

[MsJewel]

A lovely tribute!
Happy Independence Day!

:) Julie

[A. Amos]

Same to you my friend!

[Avinash]

Happy Independence Day to all my friends from America. No one who has stood for righteousness has ever gone without making enemies. Nothing is perfect but its pursuit which makes America different from other countries and always be as long as truth and justice prevail and men and women who believe in them are there.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Avinash...

[ron]

Very well said Amos. Yes America is all this and more.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Ron...

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[KWP]

I like the sentiment ...

unfortunately, standing on the outside looking in I don't agree with all that is said ... don't even get me started on gun laws or Fracking.

...hmmm if in God We Trust, why does everyone have to carry a gun these days ?

[A. Amos]

Thank you Liz...not a law maker:)

[KWP]

I understand and admire very much your patriotism ... Just like I Love Australia x x

[A. Amos]

Thank you for understanding:)

[AprilRN1210]

Nice tribute A! God Bless and Happy 4th to you:)

Land of the free and home of the brave.... Like most families, we have our crazies, our ones we wish we could disown, power struggles, bossy ones, ones that think they are better, but we love each other and when sh*t hits the fan we stand together...

[ron]

Very well said April.

[A. Amos]

In every house and family there are problems, together we will fix it! Same to you and thank you...

[Rene Salinas]

Really honest and strong feeling here. It would be diffuclt from over here to assess this feelings due to cultural differences but my two little ones were born over there so I have an inkling over all the emotions you want to convey. And in my experience they are a truthful reflection. I assume that becuase you wanted to upheld a image then it was the time to embelish and not become critical. It does also contains a quick spring and it moves you to the next line with pragmatism and passion.

Happy 4th indeed and thankyou so much for sharing such positivity

p.s But why does rolling rock use the number 33?

[A. Amos]

Thank you Rene...the answer will message you!