God Bless America

God Bless America

 

World can say, whatever they think

or want, we are born free and ruled

them all, a land blessed by the Lord

our motto is simple, in God we trust

 

We welcome all religions, respect them

believe in equality, humanity we care

provide asylum to those who need

a land chosen by God, to make him proud

 

Our men and women in uniforms are

the bravest from all, we don't forget

enemy we find, even we have to invade

a foreign country, we hunt them down

 

Donations, aids and charities we provide

still those countries treat us like ungrateful wives

we stand with weak, fight most evil enemies

which are barbarians, untamed beasts and freaks

 

Lord be with our leaders, give wisdom to all

let all of us be united, like one strong family

we are proud to be Americans, because

in freedom we believe, God bless America

 

Till there is sun, moon and stars, I pray to God

my flag stay on top, until the end of time let USA

be blessed with Prosperity, one strong united nation

the leader of the world, hear my little prayer my Lord!

 

A. Amos

Author's Note

Happy 4th of July

Reviews

[Morgan Storms]

I like that this view is positive. So many people complain about how terrible it is. I am always like, yes no one is perfect and the past was unfair and unkind, but we are moving in the right direction. And look at the rest of the world. There's so much disease, famine, genocide, infanticide, war and poverty! I tell people that we are spoiled. They have no idea what harsh conditions are ad are lucky to not have bombs blowing up innocent homes and kids. Thanks for writing.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Morgan...

[Ally Monique]

What a wonderful tribute to America and the 4th of July! I love the 4th of July, its always so positive and uplifting, just like your poem! Thank you for sharing this on such a lovely day :)

[A. Amos]

Thank you Ally...

[J. K. Beach]

Very patriotic! So apropos on this, our Independence Day... nice work!

[A. Amos]

Thank you J.k...

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Amos. You have uplifted many American souls today. I can hear your thankfulness, honesty and spirit ring in every word.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Alfred...

[Stephanie M]

We are quite lucky to live in a country full of opportunities, where we have the freedom to live the way we want to. Nicely written. Have a great Fourth of July.

[A. Amos]

Same to you Stephanie and thank you for kind words...

[Stephanie M]

your welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. We still know freedom in the USA. We can decide religion, education and dreams still. Woman can do great things in the land of the free. Thank you for the outstanding poetry for the 4th of July.
Coyote

[A. Amos]

Thank you Coyote...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree again. Powerful words my friend.

[A. Amos]

Thank you my friend...

[John Anderson]

I respect your devotion to your country, but am afraid I do not share in its celebration. I consider America an evil, corrupted imperialistic country

[A. Amos]

Thank you John...

[brian mclaughlin]

nicely written piece, i wish stanza 2 was true at this time in history, i don't believe it is.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Brian...

[Frieda P]

Home of the free and the brave, Amen to that Amos! Nice one for Independence Day, you know you're going to get some flack for this one though...

[A. Amos]

Thank you FP...

[Frieda P]

My pleasure my friend, and I just noticed you already have some...now I feel sick.

[A. Amos]

I'm not a politician:) not here to discuss international issues, just an ordinary guy who love his country! We are writers not fighters...thank you once again.

[Frieda P]

I got that, you're too clean to be a politician sir!.... but some people just have to hate on Americans. Take the poem as a fine tribute and move along....

[A. Amos]

Thank you FP, love you for your support as always...a poetic hug:)

[Ayushi]

A great patriotic write.
God bless America and you too :)

[A. Amos]

Thank you Ayushi...

[Gurleen Saluja]

A good write.. reflects patriotism well.. :)

[A. Amos]

Thank you Gurleen...

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome.. :)