Whatsoever did I seek ?

Another peep into a woman's mind :) this will be confusing I know because my thoughts were confused too when i wrote this...a free flow again :)

Let her soar free of that love unbound

Let her fly past chains of limits that cloud.

Once confined and restrained

She will decay in slow disdain.

She for sure marvels at the touch of that cord

How it would tauten stifling out her words

She sure wonders at the feel of the blaze

How it would prickle while licking at her flesh

She sure questions the power of that fluid

Of how it would drown her away her guilt

So let her soar free of that love unbound

So let her fly past chains of limits that cloud.

She may scorn and mock in verses

Vent her anguish out as curses

But slowly hush and submission untrue

Growing merely into a shadow of you

She will stare through those empty eyes

Lost in midst of dreams unwise

Evil thoughts will plague her psyche

While you are blind of those nights

So let her soar free of that love unbound

So let her fly past chains of limits that cloud.

She seems selfish you sense so

Maybe it’s true she does know

Born nor to commit neither to serve

Even though lovingly you dictate her terms

You fell in love with her eccentric eyes

Her lust for freedom and strange insight

You pretended to know her as she was

But now you insist otherwise.

So please let her soar free of that love unbound

So please let her fly past chains of limits that cloud.

Else the fire in those lively eyes

Will flicker and fade a nascent white

And you shall wonder where you went un-right

As you weep at her slow demise.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

haha...could not think of any title...please suggestions required :)

Reviews

[Alana McGuire]

Wooow the descriptions you used for her are exceptionally incredible!! I'm seriously in awe at your words. And I hope that she goes free instead of slowly demising.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful write with me. :)

[Cassie Fraga]

and a free flow of BRILLIANT!!! a lot goin on in this poetic piece... a hand reaching for freedom, oooooh how I know this feeling!! and you did a great job in expressing such emotion, great read!!