Whatsoever did I seek ?

Another peep into a woman's mind :) this will be confusing I know because my thoughts were confused too when i wrote this...a free flow again :)

Let her soar free of that love unbound

Let her fly past chains of limits that cloud.

Once confined and restrained

She will decay in slow disdain.

She for sure marvels at the touch of that cord

How it would tauten stifling out her words

She sure wonders at the feel of the blaze

How it would prickle while licking at her flesh

She sure questions the power of that fluid

Of how it would drown her away her guilt

So let her soar free of that love unbound

So let her fly past chains of limits that cloud.

She may scorn and mock in verses

Vent her anguish out as curses

But slowly hush and submission untrue

Growing merely into a shadow of you

She will stare through those empty eyes

Lost in midst of dreams unwise

Evil thoughts will plague her psyche

While you are blind of those nights

So let her soar free of that love unbound

So let her fly past chains of limits that cloud.

She seems selfish you sense so

Maybe it’s true she does know

Born nor to commit neither to serve

Even though lovingly you dictate her terms

You fell in love with her eccentric eyes

Her lust for freedom and strange insight

You pretended to know her as she was

But now you insist otherwise.

So please let her soar free of that love unbound

So please let her fly past chains of limits that cloud.

Else the fire in those lively eyes

Will flicker and fade a nascent white

And you shall wonder where you went un-right

As you weep at her slow demise.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

haha...could not think of any title...please suggestions required :)

Reviews

[Ruth]

I loved this!
I actually think the title you have is wonderful for this piece!
Really vivid and poignantly reaching, excellent xoxo

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Soar Free of Love unbound..........as a free spirit who also loves deeply and unconditionally I understand this wonderful piece. Let her be who she is and hold her gently so she can breathe. A beautiful piece.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Fly past chains of limits that cloud"~such an amazing imagery that you have brilliantly depicted in this wonderful piece. Great write!

[Shadows of Memories]

Am speechless and need silence for a moment at least.just can say wow.keep sharing :)

[Manpreet]

Vow Lovely write!

[Lily Mae]

I felt as though I was flying within a journey of your words.. You described these emotions very well..xx

[Thea]

Such a unique thought...Love the perfect descriptions you put in there including the flow of words and the usage of the accurate vocabulary...Brilliant... *claps* Really enjoyed the read! Well done!
:)))

[EMF]

Incredible descriptive and powerful. Breathtaking in the dance of sytax. A superb write

[msharma]

Very descriptive loved the thoughts rolled slowly carving a picture at one's end.