nice poem - i totally agree! but i think it has 19 syllables instead of 17 so.. it's not really a haiku. (the same thing happened with me, when i wrote my first haiku)
Awesome dear, good writing. I am expecting this type of haiku from your pen. With immense pleasure and happiness. Great job. A lifetime achievement in the carrer of Haiku writing. With regards.
I thought I saw the rainbow,
I believed I viewed the sunshine,
I conceived the breeze with promises anew,
With a faith that was firm and prayers divine.
But;
Why the clouds obscure so lovely th.. more..
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