Sometimes when we stare long at letters,they fade &jumble.Similarly if we ponder upon a decision , its pros &cons too long,we may fumble,gradually turn unsure & ultimately unable to do what we wanted.
I hope I have been able to convey what I wanted...hope the meaning is clear.It was actually an idea for a poem,I thought how it would look as an haiku :) (Pardon for any mistakes and pl feel free to point out errors-still raw in haiku)
PS-by "thoughts" I wished to mean"decisions" but couldn't find any appropriate word..if it sounds awkward ,I will be very thankful if you can provide me with suggestions :)
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Good word coined for this haiku. Meaning for this may be manifolded. Most appropriate words for the views of everybody. Views may differ but it reveals good truth. Best wishes.
I thought I saw the rainbow,
I believed I viewed the sunshine,
I conceived the breeze with promises anew,
With a faith that was firm and prayers divine.
But;
Why the clouds obscure so lovely th.. more..
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