I love your format of conveying ideas via short lines or simply phrases(well-penned phrases). Maybe I didn't get who 'she' is but I honestly enjoyed the story behind somewhat (positively) jarring descriptions.
"Passion for her
Is strong and short,
Roars like the storm
And dies like the
worm.
Her preys, her
stimulation,
Figments of
imagination,
Motivation and
creation,
Consumption and
destruction!
Once served and
done
She laughs- “lo & be
gone”!..."
This was captivating! The details and description were vivid and juicy. It seems to me that you're talking about a girl's complexity, and I loved it. This was my favorite part:
"Yet
She loves, she adores,
The waves the ocean,
The rain, the sun,
The moon, the stars,
She sprints and gathers
Pebbles and feathers.
Dreams of Juliet,
Romeo and ladders!"
These lines show how in the end, girls still dream and love the same things. I loved it. To my favorites this goes. :)
I love your format of conveying ideas via short lines or simply phrases(well-penned phrases). Maybe I didn't get who 'she' is but I honestly enjoyed the story behind somewhat (positively) jarring descriptions.
"Passion for her
Is strong and short,
Roars like the storm
And dies like the
worm.
Her preys, her
stimulation,
Figments of
imagination,
Motivation and
creation,
Consumption and
destruction!
Once served and
done
She laughs- “lo & be
gone”!..."
I thought I saw the rainbow,
I believed I viewed the sunshine,
I conceived the breeze with promises anew,
With a faith that was firm and prayers divine.
But;
Why the clouds obscure so lovely th.. more..